Man From Earth subtitled in Occidental: part 2

Here's part 2 of the translation of Man from Earth into Occidental that I started here.

(to see the movie as is, see here)

English	Occidental	French
Still, it's a superb copy.	25 00:01:53,608 --> 00:01:55,860 Támen, it es un superb copie.	25 00:01:53,608 --> 00:01:55,860 Quand même, c'est une superbe copie.
Contemporaneous, I think. May I take a closer look?	26 00:01:56,120 --> 00:01:59,828 Es contemporan, yo pensa. Esque yo posse vider plu proxim?	26 00:01:56,120 --> 00:01:59,828 C'est contemporain, je crois. Je peux regarder de plus près ?
Please, yeah.	27 00:01:59,948 --> 00:02:01,598 Yes, certmen.	27 00:01:59,948 --> 00:02:01,598 Je t'en prie.
Yeah, it's the same stretcher as van gogh used.	28 00:02:02,980 --> 00:02:05,448 Yes, es li sam portuore* usat per Van Gogh.	28 00:02:02,980 --> 00:02:05,448 Oui, c'est le type de cadre que Van Gogh utilisait.
Yeah, there's writing on the back in french.	29 00:02:05,568 --> 00:02:08,206 Yes, es un scrition in francesi ye li dorse.	29 00:02:05,568 --> 00:02:08,206 Oui, quelque chose est écrit derrière, en français.
Oh, "To my friend Jacque Borne. " Wonder who that was?	30 00:02:08,326 --> 00:02:11,731 Oh, "Por mi amico Jacque Borne." Qui esset ti person, yo demanda me?	30 00:02:08,326 --> 00:02:11,731 "Pour mon ami Jacques Borne". Je me demande qui c'était ?
-Someone he knew, I guess. -Brilliant deduction, Sherlock.	31 00:02:11,851 --> 00:02:15,178 - Alquí qui il conosset, certmen. - Brilliant deduction, Sherlock.	31 00:02:11,851 --> 00:02:15,178 - Quelqu'un qu'il connaissait, sûrement. - Brillante déduction, Sherlock.
Surely you'll have this looked at, appraised?	32 00:02:15,298 --> 00:02:18,003 Certmen tu va far un estimation del valore de it?	32 00:02:15,298 --> 00:02:18,003 Tu vas tout de même faire estimer sa valeur ?
Well, maybe sometime, but...	33 00:02:18,123 --> 00:02:20,330 Fórsan un die, ma...	33 00:02:18,123 --> 00:02:20,330 Peut-être un jour, mais je...
But I wouldn't really want money for it.	34 00:02:20,450 --> 00:02:23,138 yo vermen ne vell desirar moné por it.	34 00:02:20,450 --> 00:02:23,138 ne voudrais pas vraiment en tirer de l'argent.
That does it.	35 00:02:24,913 --> 00:02:26,363 Es lu tot.	35 00:02:24,913 --> 00:02:26,363 Ça y est.
Put that stuff in the kitchen.	36 00:02:27,522 --> 00:02:29,025 Mette ti coses in li cocina.	36 00:02:27,522 --> 00:02:29,025 Mettez ça dans la cuisine.
No, I'm gonna put it in the bathroom, John.	37 00:02:29,145 --> 00:02:32,347 No, yo va metter to in li chambre balneari, John.	37 00:02:29,145 --> 00:02:32,347 Non, je vais mettre ça dans la salle de bains, John.
Gas is off, electricity's on.	38 00:02:32,467 --> 00:02:34,482 Li gas es cludet, li electricitá curre.	38 00:02:32,467 --> 00:02:34,482 Le gaz est coupé, l'électricité fonctionne.
Get comfortable while you can. The furniture's going this afternoon.	39 00:02:36,285 --> 00:02:39,738 Sedenta vos quande vu posse. Li mobles departe midíe.	39 00:02:36,285 --> 00:02:39,738 Installez-vous tant que vous pouvez. Les meubles partent cette après-midi.
It's been years since I sat on a floor.	40 00:02:39,998 --> 00:02:42,615 Yo ne ha sedet sur li suol durante quelc annus.	40 00:02:39,998 --> 00:02:42,615 Je ne me suis pas assis par terre depuis des années.
-Heh. I can't remember her name. -Eh, it's good for the back.	41 00:02:43,637 --> 00:02:46,345 - Heh. Yo ne memora li nómine de ella. - Es bon por li dorse.	41 00:02:43,637 --> 00:02:46,345 - Je ne me souviens pas de son nom. - C'est bon pour le dos.
-Can we do yoga exercises? -Tantric yoga, we can.	42 00:02:46,465 --> 00:02:49,956 - Posse on far yoga? - Yoga tantric, yes.	42 00:02:46,465 --> 00:02:49,956 - On peut faire du yoga ? - Du yoga tantrique, oui.
So you're leaving good old "we teach u. "	43 00:02:51,574 --> 00:02:54,365 Alor tu quitta li bon universitá?	43 00:02:51,574 --> 00:02:54,365 Alors tu quittes ta bonne vieille école ?
Rather suddenly, you must admit.	44 00:02:54,485 --> 00:02:57,005 Un poc subitmen, tu deve admisser.	44 00:02:54,485 --> 00:02:57,005 Assez subitement, tu dois admettre.
Truth time, John.	45 00:02:57,265 --> 00:02:59,258 Hor de veritá, John.	45 00:02:57,265 --> 00:02:59,258 Heure de vérité, John.
-Is there a problem? -No.	46 00:02:59,378 --> 00:03:01,718 - Hay un problem? - No.	46 00:02:59,378 --> 00:03:01,718 - Il y a problème ? - Non.
Oh come on, you know we wanna help.	47 00:03:02,120 --> 00:03:04,312 Ples, tu save que noi vole assister.	47 00:03:02,120 --> 00:03:04,312 Allons, tu sais qu'on veut aider.
That's appreciated, but really... there's no problem.	48 00:03:04,432 --> 00:03:07,348 Yo aprecia it, ma vermen... Es null problem.	48 00:03:04,432 --> 00:03:07,348 J'apprécie, mais vraiment... Il n'y a aucun problème.
Well, now I am curious. Where are you going?	49 00:03:08,095 --> 00:03:11,311 Bon, nu yo vole saver. U ea tu?	49 00:03:08,095 --> 00:03:11,311 Maintenant, je suis curieux. Où vas-tu ?
Givin' up tenure... A decade of professorship...	50 00:03:11,571 --> 00:03:14,314 - Tu cede tui oficie titular... - Un decennie de professoratu...	50 00:03:11,571 --> 00:03:14,314 - Tu cèdes ton poste titulaire... - Une décennie de professorat...
In line to chair the department...	51 00:03:14,880 --> 00:03:17,125 In position por li catedre del departement...	51 00:03:14,880 --> 00:03:17,125 Présenti à la chaire du département...
And you don't know where you're going?	52 00:03:17,245 --> 00:03:19,695 E tu ne save u tu ea?	52 00:03:17,245 --> 00:03:19,695 Et tu ne sais pas où tu vas ?

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Man From Earth subtitled in Occidental: part 1

The Man from Earth is pretty much the perfect movie to translate into an IAL, because 1) it's a good movie with a ton of conversation and no slang, and 2) the producer approves of the movie being distributed for free, guaranteeing maximum exposure (i.e. you can put it up on your blog or anywhere else without fear of reprisal).

After I'm done there'll be a nice .svt file to give to anybody you want to demonstrate how the language looks. Actually there already is an .svt file, but at the moment it's all in French except for the first part I've translated. I've gone with the French file instead of one English subtitle file I found because the former uses larger blocks of time, so you'll have person A and person B's dialogue in one area for four seconds for example instead of person A for two seconds, then switching over to person B for the next two. The former method is easier to concentrate on.

The word I've made for the term (female) stripper is devestitora. Correct or no?

(to see the movie as-is, see here)

English	Occidental	French
The Man from Earth	1 00:00:19,895 --> 00:00:24,195 Li Mann del Terre	1 00:00:19,895 --> 00:00:24,195 L'Homme de la Terre
Hey, buddy.	2 00:00:42,478 --> 00:00:44,328 Hé, amico.	2 00:00:42,478 --> 00:00:44,328 Salut, mon vieux.
-You don't waste time, do you? -I try not to.	3 00:00:44,922 --> 00:00:48,322 - Tu ne perdi li témpor, hm? - Yo pena talmen.	3 00:00:44,922 --> 00:00:48,322 - Tu ne perds pas ton temps, hein ? - J'essaie.
-Well, you need help? -Sure.	4 00:00:48,551 --> 00:00:51,451 - Besona tu auxilie? - Certmen.	4 00:00:48,551 --> 00:00:51,451 - Tu as besoin d'aide ? - Volontiers.
Would you like to tell us what the hell that was all about?	5 00:00:55,285 --> 00:00:58,435 Vole tu dir a nos quo in inferne ocurret ta?	5 00:00:55,285 --> 00:00:58,435 Tu veux bien nous dire ce qu'il t'a pris ?
-I don't like goodbyes. -Kind of the point of a goodbye party, John.	6 00:00:58,853 --> 00:01:03,303 - Yo ne ama li adíos. - Pro to on fa un adío-festa, John.	6 00:00:58,853 --> 00:01:03,303 - Je n'aime pas les adieux. - C'est pourquoi on fait une fête, John.
Went to a certain amount of trouble, you know?	7 00:01:03,819 --> 00:01:05,817 To besonat un quantitá de efortie, tu save?	7 00:01:03,819 --> 00:01:05,817 On s'est donné du mal, tu sais ?
Could've at least stayed a few minutes, huh?	8 00:01:05,937 --> 00:01:08,522 Adminim tu posset remanet quelc minutes, huh?	8 00:01:05,937 --> 00:01:08,522 Tu aurais pu rester quelques minutes, hein ?
Eaten some of the food we so feverishly prepared?	9 00:01:08,642 --> 00:01:12,080 Manjar un poc del manjage quel noi preparat tal generosimen?	9 00:01:08,642 --> 00:01:12,080 Manger un peu de ce qu'on a si fébrilement préparé ?
-I apologize, Harry. -But why are you moving so quickly?	10 00:01:12,200 --> 00:01:14,749 - Pardon, Harry. - Ma pro quo tu move tan rapidmen?	10 00:01:12,200 --> 00:01:14,749 - Pardon, Harry. - Pourquoi tu déménages si vite ?
You only resigned a couple of days ago.	11 00:01:14,869 --> 00:01:16,848 Tu departet tui oficie ante solmen quelc dies.	11 00:01:14,869 --> 00:01:16,848 Tu as démissionné à peine avant-hier.
You got the history chair at stanford.	12 00:01:16,968 --> 00:01:19,241 Tu ganiat li Catedre de Historie a Stanford?	12 00:01:16,968 --> 00:01:19,241 Tu as la chaire d'Histoire à Stanford ?
I wish.	13 00:01:19,361 --> 00:01:20,455 Yo vell amar to.	13 00:01:19,361 --> 00:01:20,455 J'aimerais bien.
Well, taquitos, chicken wings, Roastie-Toasties and beer.	14 00:01:20,575 --> 00:01:24,749 Bon, taquitos, ales de gallines, Roastie-Toasties e bir.	14 00:01:20,575 --> 00:01:24,749 Des taquitos, des ailes de poulet, des toasts et de la bière.
If we'd had more time, we'd have done something a little more grandiose.	15 00:01:24,949 --> 00:01:28,265 Con plu témpor, noi vell hat fat alquó plu grandiosi.	15 00:01:24,949 --> 00:01:28,265 Avec du temps, on aurait fait quelque chose d'un peu plus grandiose.
Candlelight dinner at McDonald's. Strippers.	16 00:01:28,385 --> 00:01:31,947 Un diné con li luce de candeles. Devestitoras*.	16 00:01:28,385 --> 00:01:31,947 Un dîner aux chandelles chez McDonald's. Des strip-teaseuses.
Taquitos are fine.	17 00:01:32,067 --> 00:01:34,005 Taquitos es bon.	17 00:01:32,067 --> 00:01:34,005 Les taquitos me vont.
A'right.	18 00:01:34,125 --> 00:01:35,575 Bon.	18 00:01:34,125 --> 00:01:35,575 D'accord.
Dan: art's gonna be along, too. He's, uh, talking to a student. Pfft.	19 00:01:35,695 --> 00:01:39,280 Anc Art va venir. Il, uh, nu parla con un studiante. Pfft.	19 00:01:35,695 --> 00:01:39,280 Art va venir aussi. Il est en train de... parler avec une étudiante.
Is George taking over for you?	20 00:01:39,400 --> 00:01:41,214 Es George qui va remplazzar tu?	20 00:01:39,400 --> 00:01:41,214 C'est George qui te remplace ?
George or trimbell - Has the dean made up his mind?	21 00:01:41,334 --> 00:01:43,692 George o Trimbell. Ha li decan decidet?	21 00:01:41,334 --> 00:01:43,692 George ou Trimbell. Le Doyen s'est décidé ?
-He hasn't called. -My God!	22 00:01:43,812 --> 00:01:45,944 - Ancor il ne ha telefonat. - Mi Deo!	22 00:01:43,812 --> 00:01:45,944 - Pas encore. - Mon Dieu !
What's this? It looks like a Van Gogh, but I've never seen it before.	23 00:01:46,064 --> 00:01:49,521 Que es to? It sembla quam un Van Gogh, ma yo nequande ha videt it.	23 00:01:46,064 --> 00:01:49,521 Qu'est-ce que c'est ? On dirait du Van Gogh, mais je ne l'ai jamais vu.
-Is that an original, John? -No, it's just a gift someone gave me.	24 00:01:49,975 --> 00:01:53,488 - Es to un oríginal, John? - No, solmen un don quel alqui dat a me.	24 00:01:49,975 --> 00:01:53,488 - C'est un original, John ? - Non, c'est un cadeau qu'on m'a offert.

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